Many criminals reoffend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Over the past few years, a rising number of prisoners has reoffended after being released. This essay will look into major contributors underlying the reoffence and suggest some drastic solutions to address the issue.
The reoffence of prisoners after being released is a complicated issue with more than one cause. The most significant contributor is poverty and unemployment. Particularly, a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult due to social prejudice against prisoners. In other words, people who commit crimes often have no other way of making a living. A study has shown that a criminal record decreases the opportunities of a job offer by nearly 50 percent. That is because many employers perform a background check on potential employees so that managers can hire workers they trust. Therefore, people, who are not in the workforce, can not afford daily products and may commit a crime to make ends meet. Another notable contributor is the prison system. To be more specific, the prison system can make the situation worse since offenders mix with other criminals who can be a negative influence. Law offenders engaging in unlawful activities may learn how to commit a severe crime from convicts involved in atrocious crime. As a consequence, people serving a custodial sentence do not alter criminal behavior and they tend to enhance their criminal skills.
A number of drastic measures should be taken to reduce the crime rate of reoffenders after getting out of prison. The way forward might be for the government to bring in strict laws to punish criminals. The strict laws are introduced to bring fear in the mind of the potential offenders so that before committing the crime they know that they have to accept the severe consequences of their actions. Consequently, strict laws help the government to prevent criminal activities from transpiring in the first place since people may fear committing a crime. Another viable solution is to educate and raise awareness of young people. That is because young people are more likely to be involved in criminal activities since they have to face various challenges that make them particularly vulnerable to crime and violence. As a result, parents should teach children social skills, and schools should organize activities and programs to prevent delinquent behavior among students. For instance, a school in America launched a program to teach students about severe consequences they may bear in the event that they are involved in illegal activities.
In conclusion, wrongdoers may reoffend after they finish their term and leave prison. From my perspective, tackling recidivism depends not only on individual’s to be aware of the consequences but also on the government’s attempt to introduce strict punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 395, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decrease'?
Suggestion: decrease
... study has shown that a criminal record decreases the opportunities of a job offer by nea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25279642058 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88922515201 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534675615213 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1432346215 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.086956522 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315367080632 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782649643521 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552163809242 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169826526476 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565209541099 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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