Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Many convicts after penalize tend to do crime works again. This essay will discuss the main cause of the propensity to do illegal works by wrongdoers even after punishments and also suggest solutions to this problem, including developing rehabilitation centres and investing in improving the amount of study while the criminals are in prison.
Whit a little deep research, it is revealed that many criminals have the same backgrounds in the lack of educations as well as family similarities like unemployment and poverty. Due to a lack of technical and practical skills, these people have no chance to get a job, so they deprived of income. Statistics show that more than 60% of offenders do not have any work experience, and 40% of them have no work experience and regular income. Therefore, it can be seen that a lack of skills and education can be an important factor in leading people to crime.
Having a special look at developing the rehabilitation centers and encourage prisoners to study can have a great impact on reoffending index. In the mentioned center, prisoners can learn practical skills and gain experiment, and become a master in their favorite profession. For instance, there are many well-equipped plumbing workshops and construction facilities in US prisons where inmates can use and even receive a reduced sentence if they acquire the necessary skills in a profession. By this method, at the end of the sentence, individuals can find a suitable job and earn an income, in which case there is no need to revert to illegal activities.
Returning to illegal activity, which is done by the former prisoners, has become a controversial problem. This essay discussed the main cause of criminals re-offending activities, and also suggested two solutions, including focusing on prisoners’ skills and upgrading their knowledge by increasing their study time, which certainly improves the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19741100324 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.024125959 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9937952218 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266753719756 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899828036885 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450348498153 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146771884057 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604557651253 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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