A large company in your area has decided to spen a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local dhildren's sport team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team;
- summarise the benefits of paying for concerts;
- say how you think the company should spend the money.
Dear Sir or Madam,
First of all, I am writing to inform you regarding which could be the best manner of money spend that the public would appreciate the most.
On one hand, you give the possibility to sponsor our children's sports team which I think this is a great idea because it would bring friends and family closer in game days. Moreover, it might take the young one to travel outside the city and make new friends.
However, the open-air concert idea is promissing and could bring tourists to our town. They would pay for restaurants and hotels, so it is an excellent way of grow this town's economy.
In my opinion, you should use this money for the events in open-air because we are a small town and this could definitely put us on the map and help our business around here.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
... so it is an excellent way of grow this towns economy. In my opinion, you should u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61392405063 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29317519164 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.895176799 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124779910559 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488620810973 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294867559829 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604113709734 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304109151627 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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