Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
During the years, it is remarkable how fashion and trends dictated the way people dressed. Nowadays, it isn't so different and some clothes are particularly used by a certain group of people being easy to identify their beliefs and costumes. This essay will present facts and examples agrreing partialy that a person can be analysed for their dress code.
First, a person's culture mus be respected and in some cases, this means wear specific clothes. In every country can be percepeted how religion influence the manner people are dressed, but while in ocidental countries the culture is widespread in oriental the middle east cities beliefs are unique have severe punishments for those who not follow it. For example, women in United Arab Emirates are forbbiden to get out home without covering their entire body which is why they wear a burka in order to not suffer a penalty. So, in this matter, the dressing, besides mandatory by their religion, involves a particularly group of women.
Also, people judge each other by the choice of their clothes and try to guess . A person who wears simple clothes does not tends to be more selfgiving and respectful with others while someone who is dressed up fancier may be rude or disrespectful because can only think about money and how to take advantage of the situation. For example, Warren Buffet is always wears fancy clothes and also is one of the most inspiring persons on Earth because his speeches and donatios to charities and institutions. Therefore, the way you dress not always reflects your character.
In conclusion, people's choice of clothes might suffer influence of culture, although, the way you dress cannot always express exactly you character. Thus, in my opinion, I agree partialy on the statement because a person's character isn't so easy to perceive only by their looks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00977198697 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57823283154 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1280094827 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.307692308 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193284001492 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710705451408 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430303805628 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123689600744 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356187166514 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.