In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? third world societies children are involved in work field, due to the socioeconomic conditions. Some people argue about the advantages of letting the children take responsibilities and tackle real life problems. Others perceive it as a violation of children’s rights, which is totally unacceptable in many sophisticated societies.
Many people consider children’s work issue as a crime against children who have the right to have a normal and comfort life. As children are very vulnerable at that young age, and yet are not qualified to bear the burden of work-related activities. Moreover, in most cases, children are mistreated and abused by their bosses which causes many psychological and physical problems to the afflicted ones all over their lives. Another harmful ramification of this issue is that the children who work are more likely neglect their education on favour of their work. Therefore, most of these children do not have a chance for better future.
On the flip side, many unprivileged and impoverished families consider having their children to work as an essential need, in order to get regular financial support. Besides, many studies have found that in comparison to their peers; children who work at very young age are more dependable, resilient and less damaging. Other would argue that working at young age can teach the child how to tackle real life problems easily and it gives him the chance to learn an occupation that can be grown and used in building his future.
I believe that, children should not work because they are extremely fragile to put up with all the amount of strain that work requires; without being harmed emotionally and psychologically. They should have completely normal and stress-free childhood that enables them to grow up naturally, and become strong and well-educated individuals who can contribute to their nations’ development.
In a few words, children’s work has been a controversial issue; as the world’s economy took nosedive, the widespread of this phenomenon increases everyday. People have different opinions about the effects of this issue on children. While some people may support it, others oppose it.
Although, having discussions about it, doesn’t make any difference in children’s life!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, well, while, kind of, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.03092783505 495% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 937.175257732 230% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 398.0 206.0 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42211055276 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 3.78020617076 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09315157681 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 127.690721649 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55527638191 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 290.88556701 230% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4718733554 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442558269669 0.216113520407 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153242391835 0.0766984524023 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163797636565 0.0603063233224 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223998300211 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225616224035 0.0580467560999 389% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 41.2886597938 247% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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