The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Smmerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the information regarding how much energy consumed by household in Australia.therefore, some accupants used electercity according the table.
Overall, the electercity used in typical Austalian home mandatory category of usage is heating and cooling because in Australia weather changes get horrible sometimes that is why Australian's use to much energy to use cooling and heating appliances.
Having a quick glance it is apparent that the highly used appliances for heating and cooling it account for 38% of electercity therefore, slightly down proportion of water heating products a quarter consumption of energy. Looking to the similers, lighting and refrigerators are at the same 7% .
Moving towards the rest of the information in middle, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by power had lowest proportion of number rather than other energey holders cooking also had only 1% above tha the stand by power consumptions. One people in the Australian house use 5,000-65,000 kw electricity and if they are two people than it consume 6,000-8,000 kw of electricity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...ing and refrigerators are at the same 7% . Moving towards the rest of the inf...
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...le, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by po...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...he source of electricity stand by power had lowest proportion of number rather than other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51136363636 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23787474596 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1755577242 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 76.5299724578 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206837133226 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909618579143 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070434821949 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125049473263 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642044559879 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 8.71597938144 175% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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