On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Hello Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to know about the claim procedures as I lost my gold bracelet while I was on vacation to Goa between 12 to 15 July 2019.
The bracelet is gold-plated and has silver lining around the edges along with floral design of three roses surrounded by five leaves. it has an option to lock and unlock from back in addition to an inscription of my grandmother’s name. it was weighted precisely eight grams at the time of purchase, which was five years ago. Even though it is quite old but my parents have preserved the original bill of it which I am able to show you whenever asked for it.
The bracelet was a gift from my late grandmother, so it was quite close to my heart. If I had not worn it, I would have not lost it.
As my father had taken the insurance for this vacation which includes loss of any valuable item and this bracelet was already included in the list of costly items covered under insurance. so, I would like to make a claim for the value of the bracelet and request you to send me the details about how I need to proceed. will the entire process be completed online or I need to visit the office? Please let us know the details.
I am looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs Aparajita R.
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Comments
I got so many errors stating
I got so many errors stating sentence does not starts with capital letter, but the site is not allowing me to make 1st letter capital after full stop. The capital letters were automatically converted to small letters.
How much my marks will upgrade in case Upper case error is removed?
About capital letters, it is
About capital letters, it is a warning message only, and it is not serious. so the mark doesn't change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to know about t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to Goa between 12 to 15 July 2019. The bracelet is gold-plated and has silv...
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Suggestion: It
... three roses surrounded by five leaves. it has an option to lock and unlock from b...
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Suggestion: It
...cription of my grandmother's name. it was weighted precisely eight grams at t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t worn it, I would have not lost it. As my father had taken the insurance for...
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...f costly items covered under insurance. so, I would like to make a claim for the v...
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...he details about how I need to proceed. will the entire process be completed online ...
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...ce? Please let us know the details. I am looking forward for your reply. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Mrs Aparajita R.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50632911392 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51587917565 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6706311379 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1538461538 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158388998627 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468234492225 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461578452823 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763030386257 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301202051671 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.