The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:

I am a resident of new avenue colony and I am writing this letter in behalf of all residents of my colony to express and uprise concern related to the garbage collection system of our area. As of now, garbage collection vehicle is coming only once in a week to collect the waste of our locality. Which is not adequate on the basis of number of people living their, trash bins become full with in two or three days after it gets emptied; In result people don't have any other option rather to put their dustbin bags aside to trash bins.
Here i would like to let you know numerous difficulties and problems that residents are facing due to this unmanged waste that remains in open. We have seen substantcial growth in mosquitos and cockroaches breeding, hence it is causing the spread of diseases related to them in local residents. Stray animals are rading in open bags and they spills the garbage on roads and thay are also harming children and aged people, It is resulting in unbearable stinking smell thus it is very difficult for people who are living around to pass acorss that area.
Therefore, I would like to request you to increase the frequency of waste collection to twice or more to cope with incraesed number of people. In addition I would suggest to add two more trash holder box, so that people can put their rubbish in to them instead of ground.
Hope you will tahe positive and prompt action in this matter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 455, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...after it gets emptied; In result people dont have any other option rather to put the...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...dustbin bags aside to trash bins. Here i would like to let you know numerous dif...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'spill'
Suggestion: spill
...nimals are rading in open bags and they spills the garbage on roads and thay are also ...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ope with incraesed number of people. In addition I would suggest to add two more trash h...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest adding'.
Suggestion: suggest adding
...d number of people. In addition I would suggest to add two more trash holder box, so that peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55252918288 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35723171446 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3256079541 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164451032492 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603954546827 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377317308137 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835749386779 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327291477905 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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