I am occupied with my job on mornings and after 1 pm is good for me.
I am looking forward hearing from you
I am writing to demand whether a refund or correct replacement
In spite of my willingness
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Karena Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 26.3917525773 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 164.0 937.175257732 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 39.0 206.0 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20512820513 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.49899939944 3.78020617076 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73579049607 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 34.0 127.690721649 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.871794871795 0.622605031667 140% => OK
syllable_count: 49.5 290.88556701 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0425075013749 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320456887131 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00719701279994 0.0603063233224 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0237053048328 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028573797517 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 41.2886597938 19% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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