While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• explain what happened
• apologize for the accident
• tell your friend how you plan to make it up to him
Hi John,
Hope you are enjoying your vacation? I am writing to you to appologize for breaking your favourite bowl a couple of days ago.
First of all, let me explain you, it happened accidentally while I was preparing dinner. After then I decided to make something sweet as you know I am keen on deserts. When I put it into your bowl to taste, all of a sudden, our friend Liz was standing behind me to frighten me. The time I looked at her I got scared and it fell out of my hand and shattered into pieces.
I am really sorry for this. I know this word is not sufficient since I have hurted your sentiments. You have already warned me before that and told me that this is something you want to kept in your kitchen wardrobe forever because it was highly expensive thing you bought with your first salary.
Since it was my fault, I have to pay for this and you know what? I got exactly the same piece for you from a shop. And you should accept this as a thanksgiving gift as you have helped me a lot in providing me a stay in your home while I was new here.
orry again for hurting you.
With regards
Martin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-10 | ndbro17 | 73 | view |
| 2021-06-10 | ndbro17 | 73 | view |
| 2020-02-04 | Sarabjeet 9119 | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-15 | sahilverma16 | 77 | view |
| 2017-10-01 | RSudhir | 76 | view |
- The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public To what extent do you agree 78
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world Do you think that benefi 50
- In many countries recently young people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work until they married Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages of this trend 67
- While your friend was away on vacation you stayed in his apartment While you were there you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it Write a letter to your friend In your letter explain what happened apologize for the accident tell your friend how you plan 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...go. First of all, let me explain you, it happened accidentally while I was pre...
^^
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...identally while I was preparing dinner. After then I decided to make something sweet ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Orry
...ay in your home while I was new here. orry again for hurting you. With regards ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, then, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19907407407 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29225581653 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4909724168 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413830012958 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142415533834 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917210628506 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254018489173 0.12726935374 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673836519818 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.