work is beging done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. write a letter of complain to your local council. In your letter introduce yourself explain that the problem is , suggest solutions to the problem.
To council officer
Dear Mr. / Dear Madam
My name is Sharon and I am living in Herzl street, I am writing for you to express my dissatisfaction from the mess in our street. As you know recently have started to renew the road in this street, close close to my house. The main problem is the big noise during all the day from very early in the morning till late at night. In addition the busy traffic in this small street could be very dangerous, huge vehicles are enter together to the street and caught the parking place of our cars.
I spoke with the work manager to consider the needs of the residents. I asked him to reduced the work hours till 13:00 p.m., and not allow to enter more than one track in the same time, for there more to keep our parking place free.
He listen to my complains and realized our problems, he even apologized and promised to supervise more carefully about thus issues, but unfortunately it is repeat again almost every day and our life becomes woful.
So could you please concern to reduse their work hours and limit the amount of tracks that enter to our street, thus steps will enable to keep our parking place free and bring bake our life to routine.
Thank for your corporation, I appreciate your help in that matter.
Your sincerely
Sharon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: close
...arted to renew the road in this street, close close to my house. The main problem is the bi...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...y in the morning till late at night. In addition the busy traffic in this small street c...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entered'.
Suggestion: entered
...ld be very dangerous, huge vehicles are enter together to the street and caught the ...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les are enter together to the street and caught the parking place of our cars. ...
^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'entering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: entering
...rk hours till 13:00 p.m., and not allow to enter more than one track in the same time, f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'listens'.
Suggestion: listens
...ore to keep our parking place free. He listen to my complains and realized our proble...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 157, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...ut thus issues, but unfortunately it is repeat again almost every day and our life becomes w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our help in that matter. Your sincerely Sharon
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52991452991 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25103567533 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3742617064 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164354992833 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686475985192 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402023750778 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639034284997 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547196496422 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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