You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
describe the situation
explain yor problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
To Accommodation officer
Dear Sir / Dear Madam
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction from my accommodation in the college.
I am a student in the college for first degree in the faculty of math.
I am shar a room with another student, who is nice person but we are not feel good with that arrangement.
I am studying very hard to get high scores and to finish my first degree as excellent student, also it is known that math studying demands a lot of hours for practice at room, beside the lessons.
So when I come to our room I most of the time meet her with friends who lestnen to music and in very easy-going atmosphere.
I asked several times from her to stop and to consider my situation, cause I need to concentrate at my duties to the faculty,
But it repeats every day, I feel very uncomfortable to come back to my room.
Because of this situation , I am asking from you , could you please find to me another room by my own, where I can concentrate at my studies which are very important to me.
Please let me know about your decision as soon as possible.
I 'll appreciate your help in this matter.
Best Regards,
Sharon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r first degree in the faculty of math. I am shar a room with another student, wh...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not feel good with that arrangement. I am studying very hard to get high score...
^
Line 15, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to my room. Because of this situation , I am asking from you , could you please...
^^
Line 15, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of this situation , I am asking from you , could you please find to me another roo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45794392523 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67971458684 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.327726193 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231930987266 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817917434305 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699202651736 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833111495615 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692349275764 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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