Dear Alex,
I am just writing to say thank you that give me your book at the last moment. I bet you know how useful it was. You literally saved my job since my presentation was blinder.
You might hear I was picked up to present my company at the annual conference in Moscow. On the one hand, it was totally out of the blue to be chosen by a conductor since Industrial design is not my cup of tea, on the other hand, it is not rocket science. The cutting-edge technology using in designing has been presented in the presentation to a whole extent only because of your book.
As you know, having been recently promoted, I supposed to improve my performance but it did not happen. Likewise, I lost my passion. The only way to put my best foot forward was to show my best at that conference.
If it weren’t for the material from this book, I could not stand out from the crowd. Have you known that all up-to-the-minutes data related to software I was found through the cites were published in this book?
Thank you again for this engaging book and if you are interested in details call me. I look forward to hearing to looking for you
All the best,
Helen
- Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Many people think that keeping the wild animal at the zoos has good reasons Do you agree or disagree 84
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as South pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Computer is becoming an essential part of education Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer use in education and give your own opinion 84
- After finishing school some students go travelling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university Do you think the advantages of gap years outweigh the disadvantages 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Thank you again for this engaging book. If you are interested in details call me. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, so, as to, i suppose, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37037037037 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58183947249 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9935237951 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4285714286 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352591840713 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135291056333 0.0766984524023 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796502292192 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212640015754 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960247417409 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.