Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
– say what the problem is
– describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
– ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dis satisfaction with the accommodation provided to me.
Let me explain in detail, my name is sashi, I recently joined this university to pursue a 3 months course. However, I have been provided with a room which is far away from campus and also the room has no proper ventilation. Additionally I am unable to get my mobile signal while i am in the room.
When i applied for the accommodation through the university website, i thought the room will be provide inside the campus as i was new to this country as well as to the neighborhood. Furthermore, i expected a good ventilated room along with some basic amenities like wi-fi, a small study table and a bed.
In the view of this situation, i would like to request to arrange an alternative accommodation. I would like to have a small single bedded room with wi-fi and a study table and most importantly it should be in the campus. I am willing to pay extra money if needed for this type of room.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
sashia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Additionally,
...lso the room has no proper ventilation. Additionally I am unable to get my mobile signal wh...
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Suggestion:
...tion. Additionally I am unable to get my mobile signal while i am in the room. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...m unable to get my mobile signal while i am in the room. When i applied for...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ignal while i am in the room. When i applied for the accommodation through t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...odation through the university website, i thought the room will be provide inside...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...om will be provide inside the campus as i was new to this country as well as to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll as to the neighborhood. Furthermore, i expected a good ventilated room along w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ed. In the view of this situation, i would like to request to arrange an alt...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'alternative accommodation'.
Suggestion: alternative accommodation
...ion, i would like to request to arrange an alternative accommodation. I would like to have a small single be...
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...y if needed for this type of room. I look forward to hearing from you at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68020304569 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87385866376 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6454128627 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917391470223 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378907687995 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458473368963 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656695801923 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577740327348 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.