Write a letter to a friend about a museum or gallery you visited recently Why you went to the museum or gallery What you saw Why you do or do not recommend it

Dear Naimisha,

I believe this letter finds you in best of health and spirit. I hope you remember, I mentioning about my visit to Kolkata. It is a city with rich culture which is beautifully captured in its muesums and galleries. I happened to visit several monuments there and the one that cought my sight was Victoria Memorial.

You know how much I love Indian history and the affinity towards learning more about it has attracted me to visit Victoria Memorial. The white marbeled building has huge statues of all the Emporerors of India and Viceroies who have visited India during the British reign. The history of West Bengal and its vivid culture is marvelously depicted and represented in the form of miniatures.

I am extremely delighted to have got an opportunity to explore this wonderful museum. I would strongly recommend you to visit Victoria Memorial to understand the great History.Oh! One thing, do not visit Kolkata during rainy season. I would be more than willing to visit again if you'd be interested too. It will so much fun.

Can't wait to hear from you !

Your Friend,
Kusuma

Votes
Average: 9.5 (4 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...health and spirit. I hope you remember, I mentioning about my visit to Kolkata. I...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Oh
...emorial to understand the great History.Oh! One thing, do not visit Kolkata during...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
... be more than willing to visit again if youd be interested too. It will so much fun....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...interested too. It will so much fun. Cant wait to hear from you ! Your Friend,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94680851064 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64396780874 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1674347077 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278848767222 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883341876533 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870631790213 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161880333809 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365181673669 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.