Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money
Any country's economy is dependent on various factors.Some people believe that, in order to enhance the economy of a country , its citizens should spend money while others have an counter argument on saving it. I slightly agree with the latter whereas am more inclined towrads the previous argument.
First of all, the circulating money is one of the most important criteria for analyizing any Country's economy. If we spend our money, this money would be used by the Government for building up the economy.When we expend for the goods and services , along with paying actual cost we pay Taxes in different forms. These taxes are use for the development and betterment of the society as whole. As a result,Foreign Investments would increase that enables continous cash Inflows.
Having said that, one should also understand the importance of saving the money.This methodology might not have immediate results but is a huge investment for long term. The money that we save in our Banks indicates the monetary worth of a country hence attracting external investments. Not only that, this saved money could be lent to other countries in need,which not only flourish the relationship but also would be beneficial in terms of the interest value from that country.
I would like to conclude by stating that Economy of a country is effected by both ,Monetray and Non-Moneatry values.Hence it is important to focus on both to have a balanced economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, whereas, while, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08403361345 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84457329352 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8747431071 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387167822383 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124216552362 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764505310072 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187243397909 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790282312489 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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