You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana

Dear Mr.Sharma,

I am Kusuma, one of the employees of "Sai Life Sciences" who has attented the Human Resources conclave yesterday, 12 December, at your hotel. Firstly, I would like to commend your services and hospitality. However, I am writing this letter to seek an urgent assistance from you.

During the conclave, a lot of presentations were scheduled and I was coordinating the entire program. I was extremly engaged the whole time and in the rush to catch my flight back home, I have misplaced few important documenets at the Hotel. I realized that after reaching home.

Those documents contains very crucial information to complete my on-going project. It would be great if you could instruct your staff to find those documents. Moreover, I am not sure as to where have I kept those papers exactly but I believe they would be near the stage area of the conference room.Please let me know if you find the documents, I would ask one of my collegues to collect those from you.

Apologies for the inconvience caused.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Kusuma D

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sharma
Dear Mr.Sharma, I am Kusuma, one of the employees o...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
...after reaching home. Those documents contains very crucial information to complete my...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...very crucial information to complete my on-going project. It would be great if you could...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...r the stage area of the conference room.Please let me know if you find the documents, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88956714729 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3309210067 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233533149787 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681375513837 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697395605597 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11119441006 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646840770996 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Iam writing to let you known that,i hav recently attended your meeting at your hotel,unforunately upon returning home I found that some papers were missing.i think I hav left it on the table near the stage.
firstly let me explain my situation,our meeting was held in conference hall at you hotel on 12/6/19 at 6pm.as I was appointed as team leader so i was busy inviting the guest& arranging the seats.i have noted some of the points being discussed in the meeting as i was in a hurry to catch my train.i took my bag and did not wait to put all things inside.
however,there are about 15 papers and im sure that i cannot make a final copy of that without the paper,as i have a poor memory.i hav been asked to sumbit the final copy of meeting minutes next week.
would you kindly seach for my paper in conference hall and send it by courier as soon as possible so that ican submit my assignment as soon as possible.please let me know if you find my paper and send with bank details so that i can pay you .

i appreciate your assistance

your sincerely
tom