The Twenty First century has witnessed extravagant advancements in the Information Technology. Everything is easily accesible and readily available online for the users. Right from the books to movies and music albums, almost everything is available in the cloud. It certainly have positive impact, However I believe these do not outweigh the negatives.
To begin with, piracy has become a henious crime that almost all of us commit without any guilt. In the process of enjoying a movie free of cost we tend to ignore the hardwork behind it. For example, To start and succesfully complete a movie requires hardwork, perseverance and dedication of all the artists and their valuable time as well. Not only the effort and time, the money invested in these albums and movies do not have appropriate returns. The process of making the content handy to everyone leads to Data Theft and privacy invasion of the artists and their albums. Needless to mention about the Cyber crime that has affected everyone of us in one way or the other.
Having said that, the available information is useful for entertainment for all sectors of people, Let it be rich or poor. Moreover the websites like Netflix, Amazon Prime, etc. are doing phenomenal job by compiling these albums and movies on a singe platform and to make it available to everyone at reasonable subscription costs, taking a wider section of audiences under one blanket.
To sum up, I agree with the fact that availability of these music albums and movies for free has made accessibility easy but at the same time it demean the efforts of all the artists and the value of their hard earned money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Twenty-First
The Twenty First century has witnessed extravagant advan...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...is available in the cloud. It certainly have positive impact, However I believe thes...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...tors of people, Let it be rich or poor. Moreover the websites like Netflix, Amazon Prime...
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Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...nces under one blanket. To sum up, I agree with the fact that availability of these music albums and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'demeans'?
Suggestion: demeans
...essibility easy but at the same time it demean the efforts of all the artists and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, well, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94623655914 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65258160191 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.492977306 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139871325769 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458044359374 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467171284233 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928748829337 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311954332704 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.