write a letter the heat off the company that you are working in

Essay topics:

write a letter the heat off the company that you are working in

Dear Head
I was an historical teacher at the school and I had worked together with you for 4 years. Nowadays I decide to be a police officer. that is why, I am writing to need your help which you must give me a reference for my work.
This job was dream of my childhood. I think, Every uzbek men want to service to one`s country and so am I. In addition, being teacher do not choose any age and moment. Now I must service for our country`s peace then I may return at school.
Please you help me which I want hardly to work this job. So you may write my work`s action on the reference. For instance, when did I work, what could I do during of the job, and what was on good or bad terms for our colleagues and other about informations.
Thanks a lot for your help
Best regards Shukhrat Adilov

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Head I was an historical teacher at the schoo...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...wadays I decide to be a police officer. that is why, I am writing to need your help ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... must give me a reference for my work. This job was dream of my childhood. I t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s;s peace then I may return at school. Please you help me which I want hardly ...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at school. Please you help me which I want hardly to work this job. So you ...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'want'.
Suggestion: hardly want
...chool. Please you help me which I want hardly to work this job. So you may write my ...
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Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you help me which I want hardly to work this job. So you may write my work'...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lleagues and other about informations. Thanks a lot for your help Best regard...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hanks a lot for your help Best regards Shukhrat Adilov
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Shukhrat Adilov
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21153846154 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4930788482 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8748005052 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7272727273 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156378074893 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635948676389 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824124255288 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743437608047 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910665994239 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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