Write a letter to hotel manager praising a staff member
Explain the situation
What they did
What you want manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my luggage from being stolen. I checked in last Saturday and I was in a hurry to attend a meeting and as a result, I forgot my bag near the first reception.
Let me explain you the what he did. One of your staff named Mike Mellott noticed someone running away with my belongings and then Mike chased and saved my bag. Not only did he saved my bag but also caught the suspect stealing it and reported it to the police. He saved a lot of precious items and important documents containing sensitive data of my business.
Could you please give me his contact details so I can personally thank him by sending a small token of appreciation? Moreover, I would be grateful if you can recognize him at your hotel so he feels motivated consequently, other staff members will learn about his act of bravery and presence of mind.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knew'
Suggestion: knew
...er to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my lug...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...er to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my lug...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...taff named Mike Mellott noticed someone running away with my belongings and then Mike c...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61413043478 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63325733402 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0143856434 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103981781625 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039357439901 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443785216461 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069167789795 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297710665104 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.