Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:•explain what you are currently doing•describe your suitability for this area of work•say when you can attend an interview

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:

• explain what you are currently doing

• describe your suitability for this area of work

• say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to apply for the job in your restaurant as a waiter posted on Hindu newspaper recently. At the moment, I am working as a bearer at London University canteen that makes me suitable for this job and I can attend the interview during my week-off on Tuesdays.

Recently, I read Hindu newspaper, in that I saw a job opportunity in your restaurant to work as a Waiters and Waitresses. Currently, I am working as a table bearer at London University. Indeed, it is a small canteen but I handle varied of customers. I have also completed a course in hospitality enforcing my capability to work in this area as a qualified person. I usually get a day-off on Tuesdays. Therefore, I could be available at that time for an interview.

Thanks in advance for your consideration

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Kind regards,

Saka

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75974025974 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98524086337 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7739406648 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305081921244 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964732104748 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850116119617 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180915339795 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842377654598 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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