Write a letter to your friend asking him for help to make a website.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and high spirits. I came to know that you have learned website designing course; so, thought to ask your favour in creating a website for my business.
As you know, I run a shop that sells ready-made garments for all age-groups. Since people started shopping online, in-store selling is debilitating day by day. I think it's the right time for me to get my business to take a leap in technology, which is the only way to survive in competition. Therefore, I am planning to have an e-commerce site that can showcase my items, and people can watch and buy them. As you are a software professional and completed training on website development, I am sure you can help me in this area.
Admittedly, sound design and easy buying on the website would undoubtedly prosper my business. Let me know if we can meet this weekend and discuss the business-requirement. I will also take you to my shop, showing you different varieties and make you aware of the stock that I sale.
Please come with your family. This way, we can have family time together along with discussing business.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your's lovingly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ing is debilitating day by day. I think its the right time for me to get my busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75829383886 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84465225467 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3972145289 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148683502487 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508154385321 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575542311635 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745968533182 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728990604931 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.