Write a letter to your friend on a family function. In your letter write:
What is the function?
What you plan?
Why it is necessary for her to attend the function?
Dear Julie,
I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing with regard to express my happiness to invite you for a family function, in the coming month.
I'm pleased to let you know that the wedding ceremony date of my sister Ana has finalized. I had been waiting for this occasion for a long time. Though you know the responsibilities of a family function, you have to come as earlier as possible to help with me.
Actually, I have planned everything which we would do together after your arrival. Firstly, we will go for shopping as you have a great choice for selecting beautiful attires. Although, we have to organize a bangle ceremony for Ana before the wedding day. Secondly, we would become bridesmaids on a special day, so similar dress-up and makeover should be our first priority. Therefore, start searching for some outstanding designer dresses that would probably help us.
Nevertheless, this would be a traditional style of wedding, which could assist you to learn the rituals and customs of my religion. I couldn't wait for you anymore, so ping me whenever you have received this letter. Pay my regards to your parents.
Best regards,
Pria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Julie, I hope this letter finds you well. Im wr...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I hope this letter finds you well. Im writing with regard to express my happi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mily function, in the coming month. Im pleased to let you know that the weddin...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y function, you have to come as earlier as possible to help with me. Actually,...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e rituals and customs of my religion. I couldnt wait for you anymore, so ping me whenev...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gards to your parents. Best regards, Pria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90404040404 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69914885669 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4565622108 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220126942212 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725305186257 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636595942391 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151390672334 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728181738333 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.