Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the villages. What are the problems with this issue? What can be done to solve this?
The urbanization is becoming a major issue, nowadays. Many youngsters are migrating towards cities by leaving behind their grandparents in the countryside. There are some considerable causes in this situation. In this essay, I will delineate the root causes of this problem along with their solutions.
To begin with, there are various prominent factors for the migration of youth to the cities. One of these issues is infrastructure as there is a limited number of qualified schools and universities in the villages for higher studies, which influence the youngsters to move into the cities. Although, the job opportunities and a better lifestyle of urban areas have triggered the people to become residents of towns in spite of the rural areas. Take the case of India, for instance, the modern generation have been preferred to live in the metropolises such as Delhi as they are getting advanced education facilities as well as part-time jobs in these cities, without any hassle. Moreover, the communication gap of adults with their old parents goes on increasing, which deattached themselves not only from their roots but also from the family values. Hence, the practice of urbanization for the betterment of the future has been escalating.
Nevertheless, there are some feasible solutions to mitigate the problem of movement of people to the cities and towns. Firstly, the administration should emphasize on the infrastructure of villages by implementing some multi-purpose projects to curtail the ratio of unemployment. In addition to this, public transportation and welfare facilities should be improved, though people could not approach the cities of their basic needs. For illustration, the government of Finland has been instilling the dairy and textile industries in the undeveloped regions of the country in addition to transportation resources. Therefore, the level of employment and security is being improved significantly. Secondly, the relationships of different age groups could be strengthened by fulfilling the common demands of individuals, within the villages.
To summarize, the causes of migration towards cities by young people with their possible solutions are discussed. It has been categorically highlighted that the job requirements and lifestyle standards are attracting the people toward cities and government should reduce this by providing similar facilities inside the villages. It is being hoped that the nation would address this problem as a predominant issue in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19015182172 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548051948052 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1097889481 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.368421053 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282829714231 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789106626671 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671790370348 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174461015233 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685461238561 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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