Some people think that the Internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities become more isolated.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The Internet has revolutionized the way of communication among people. It is generally argued that the Internet helps individuals to come closer to each other, whilst their counterparts assert that communities are becoming separated from its usage. In my opinion, I believe that although the Internet has some negatives on people, it is more beneficial in terms of an interaction between them.
A growing way of research suggests that the Internet brings closeness among people. Admittedly, it helps to make widespread relationships effortlessly. In other words, with the availability of the Internet, people nowadays are using social networking sites to chat, video calls with their friends across the world. Also, video conferencing is becoming popular in multinationals, to talk with their overseas clients for business partnerships. Taking Facebook as an example, the most common social media application, where people can not only make new friends easily but also converse face-to-face within seconds. Hence, online media has brought closeness by making the world a global village.
However, the Internet has some negative impacts on individuals as it increases isolation. It is due to the growing addiction to gadgets when people indulging themselves in the virtual world instead of a physical conversation with their surrounding people. It can cause social distancing which thereby bringing a gap in relationships. For instance, youngsters spend their whole vacation while watching movies online on Netflix, despite sharing quality time with their family and neighborhood. It leads to a communication gap and makes them isolated from nearby people and peers. Therefore, the given disadvantage of the Internet cannot be overlooked.
In conclusion, while the Internet has some cons on communities and people for making them insociable, yet I feel that its pros for combining people globally by building connections among themselves, could not be undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the world a global village. However, the Internet has some negative impacts o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63758389262 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09726271887 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9087266972 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232711048711 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669033264347 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542680068731 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149875971143 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355063652634 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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