You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
1) Give details of the job
2) Explain why it is important to you
3) Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Brown,
Hope you are doing great!
I am writing to request you to write a letter of reference for me as I am planning to apply for a job opportunity at a multinational company, Sun Life Financials. There are some job opportunities are available in the area of software engineering, which is a trending job occupation at present. The company needs a letter of reference from one of my former teacher to accept my job application. If I got selected for this possible, I would be provided a chance to visit the United States of America and to work there for one year.
As you know, during my studies, I have been dreaming of getting a job in the United States of America, and it is the time when I should work on my dreams to make them true. So, the letter of reference is very important for me to get this job, and most importantly, to achieve my life goals and dreams.
I would like to suggest you to please mention my educational achievements in the letter of reference, which would be helpful in getting this job. Moreover, please mention my academic percentage of all semesters with grades and my position at college.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59545454545 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79194162126 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0760217715 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242427623277 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097881828162 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754807465793 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104830960453 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717746232646 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.