Dear Sir,
I am a former student of yours and was in your class of 1983. You might not remember but my inspiration to become an English Teacher came from you. I still remember your unique way of teaching and kind behavior towards your students.
I am writing this letter in anticipation of a letter of reference. As I always wanted to become an English teacher, I found an opportunity to apply for the teacher’s post at ABC school. Therefore, a letter of reference will steadily increase my chances of getting this job.
Being one of the most respected and experienced teachers around here, getting a reference letter from you will also be beneficial for my reputation. Since we haven’t been in touch recently; please find enclosed the copies of my achievements over the years with this letter, which will help you to jog your memory and will also help you to write an effective letter of reference.
I’d also request you to mention my enthusiasm towards becoming a teacher as well as my interest in the English language as I was always first to raise my hand to answer your question and was one of your favorites students.
Yours faithfully,
Sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69485235091 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4667356084 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370019945163 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150536699452 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450842550385 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219729803251 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695556253748 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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