You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course Write a letter to the college Principal In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course.

Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter

give details of your course
explain why you need a week off
say what you want the Principal to do.

Submitted by Tolik on Wed, 05/05/2021 - 02:43

Dear Mrs Johnson,

I am writing in regard of the course in programming languages I am doing at the moment at your college. The course is amazing, since I have already learn to make simple programs and are familiar with basic principles of object oriented programming. However, I want to take a few days off, because my younger brother has suddenly decided to get married next week, and my mother said that I must attend his wedding.

He is going to arrange the wedding party in my hometown, which is far from here, approximately 1000 kilometers. I would take a plane and get there in no time, but the city is so small that the government has not built an airport yet. Thus, I am think about taking either a taxi or train, but it will take me 26 hours to get there. So I need more much time off course if I want to take my time to clean myself up and dress up for the party.

I would be grateful if you allowed me to postponed my course until I arrive from the trip. It would allow me to get a certificate and find a job in IT.

Yours sincerely,
Tolegen

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...course is amazing, since I have already learn to make simple programs and are familia...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...as not built an airport yet. Thus, I am think about taking either a taxi or train, bu...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25615763547 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42757701041 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9342852839 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203783838331 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066139105788 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051953289596 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121188109139 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033430025985 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...course is amazing, since I have already learn to make simple programs and are familia...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...as not built an airport yet. Thus, I am think about taking either a taxi or train, bu...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25615763547 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42757701041 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9342852839 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203783838331 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066139105788 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051953289596 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121188109139 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033430025985 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.