You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the offer letter issued to me on 25th April, as per which I am expected to join your company on the next Thursday 5th May. I regret to inform you that I would not be able to present myself on the mentioned date due to some family emergency.
Let me explain you my situation and problem in detail. Yesterday morning, I was informed that my father has got a cardiac attack and have been admitted to the hospital. I had to rush for my hometown immediately which is nearly 500 miles from my current work location. Given I am the only child of my parents, I have to fulfill my responsibility to look after my father. Upon considering the conditions here, and discussing with the heart specialist, it feels that I would be needed here for at least a month and would be able to commence the new job on 30th May.
I apologize for the last-minute fluctuations and the inconvenience. I hope you would understand the criticality of the matter and hence I request you to kindly push my joining date to 30th May. I assure that I would try my level best to turn up as early as possible.
Looking forward to working with you soon.
Yours faithfully
Tom Robinson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the offer letter issued to me on 25th A...
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Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...indly push my joining date to 30th May. I assure that I would try my level best t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45945945946 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66416975871 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5035086423 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229210823811 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845712790508 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738332164364 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138386076439 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472543173135 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.