You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:Explain your situationDescribe your problemsTell him/her when you think you can start.

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.

Submitted by Pkvirk on Mon, 07/22/2019 - 02:33

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in regards to job offered to me for a position of Finance Manager with your company. My joining date is agreed to be 1st August 2019. I request you to postpone my joining day by 2 weeks. I can commence my duties with your company by 15th August 2019.

Being Assistant Finance Manager, my current role requires great deal of responsibilities and having historical background of underlying transactions. Further, I have put tremendous efforts in the corporate audit assignment. We managed to finalize the audit for last 6 years. We are on the verge of finalization of this engagement. Due to some unavoidable circumstances on auditor’s part, audit got shifted by three weeks.

My line manager put colossal efforts and managed to cut-short the timelines by 1 week on auditor’s part. Lastly, my company requested me to extend my services by another two weeks to have healthy and mutually beneficial separation. it seems reasonable to me. Considering criticality of situation, I request you to please revise my joining date to 15th August 2019.

Hope you will consider it positively.

Yours faithfully
Tom Edward

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to job offered to me for a position of Fin...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...thy and mutually beneficial separation. it seems reasonable to me. Considering cri...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16315789474 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13937111051 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6082733215 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173088057551 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600156398915 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631672735881 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125859991334 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742452608372 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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