You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before.Your cousin has a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to the friend.In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city(eg places to see,things to do,things to bring)
Dear Ann,
I trust you are doing great. My name is Lilian Okoye and I am Anthonia’s cousin. She was your classmate in Lagos state university. I just completed my masters programme and I am making plans to visit your city - Vancouver for the holidays. As I have never been to Vancouver before, Anthonia suggested that I seek your help with some questions about the city.
I am very excited about this trip as I have heard a lot of beautiful things about Vancouver. I hear that there are many packs and gardens in the city. I have always been fascinated by nature, hence, the main reason for my visit. Also, I have an uncle that resides in the neighbouring city, Ontario. I intend to visit him as I haven’t seen him in year’s and I have missed him a great deal.
Nonetheless, I can’t still decide on which tourist locations or monuments to visit, considering the fact that I have just 5 days to spend in the city. Could you prepare a list of the most famous tourist attractions in Vancouver and forward it to my inbox? Adding a list of affordable hotel accommodations that serve Nigerian foods would be a cherry on the cake. Since it will be winter season during my visit, are there any special clothing’s or accessories that I need to carry with me?
I would be thankful if you could spare some time out of your busy schedule and reply with some answers.
Looking forward to your response.
Best wishes,
Lilian.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d I am making plans to visit your city - Vancouver for the holidays. As I have ne...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are many packs and gardens in the city. I have always been fascinated by nature, ...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reat deal. Nonetheless, I can’t still decide on which tourist locations or mon...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response. Best wishes, Lilian.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, nonetheless, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6420233463 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61068019924 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4069764205 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1764705882 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208989203316 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607921555473 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551635217151 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125085164065 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668350102898 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.