You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Lilian Okoye and I recently enrolled in the part-time evening MBA evening course at the Lagos Business School of Social sciences. I am writing this letter to request for a change in my enrollment to the distance MBA program because of my conflicting work schedule.
I work with Beloxxi consulting company and was recently assigned a new client that requires a change in my work timing to 5:00pm - 1:00am. In fact, I recently missed some evening classes because I had to work late and this project is expected to last for 9 months. Besides this, I will be travelling to South Africa afterwards, for some official assignments. Hence, I cannot continue to pursue this evening classes anymore.
Nonetheless, I am sure I would be able to complete the course and examinations at my own pace. Not to mention, both programs cost the same. Hence, I would be thankful if my request of changing the program is granted. If this is not possible, I would prefer to discontinue the course and claim for a refund of the tuition fees.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Lilian Okoye.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... evening MBA evening course at the Lagos Business School of Social sciences. I am...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I work with Beloxxi consulting company and was recently assigned a new client t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, nonetheless, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82989690722 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71962212636 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8535513544 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148178145148 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547505667992 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043825830695 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820961587411 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310725439316 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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