You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.Write a letter to the tourist information office.In your letter:explain what you needsay when you plan to be thereask for information about pr

Essay topics:

You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.

Write a letter to the tourist information office.

In your letter:

explain what you need
say when you plan to be there
ask for information about prices
Write at least 150 words.

Hello Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter as I would like to rent an apartment for my stay in Singapore from 14th October to 29th October.

Since I am visiting for the official work, I am looking for two bedroom set near the industrial area. It should be well furnished and I also want Wifi facility as i do not have any international data pack. Furthermore, if you can facilitate taxi for my travel, it will be highly appreciated. My stay in Singapore is longer than the mentioned period as after 29th October, I want to visit the beaches and for that I shall book hotels.

I will be very thankful if you can provide me the prices based on my preferences. Please send me the quote with and without cab so that it can be compared. My daily allowance by the company is 70 USD, therefore the flat should fall under my budget. My company name is USG Boral Pvt Ltd.. You can check if it is applicable for the corporate discounts or not.

I am waiting for your reply. Please reply at earliest.

Sincerely
Abhishek Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nished and I also want Wifi facility as i do not have any international data pack...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...et. My company name is USG Boral Pvt Ltd.. You can check if it is applicable for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4708994709 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56889068481 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5184194776 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171293724265 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578400853793 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584800836339 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966742821152 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304358808417 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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