You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms
Dear Mr. Methew,
I am writing this letter to get information on apartments for holidays. Since I have had a pleasant experience with you regarding my stay during my last trip to Maldives, so I would like to avail your services this time too regarding renting a holiday resorts in Singapore.
My family and I want to get rental apartment nearby a beach. My kids are really excited to see sea shore, therefore this would be my first preference. Moreover, it would be preferable if resort would have two bedrooms with attached bathrooms because my both son is habitual of sleeping in a separate room.
My holidays will start on June 6, and I will be there on June 07 and will stay there till June 12, 2019. This time I planned to spend a short vacation in Singapore because it does not have as much places to visit as Maldives have had.
It would be great if you could send me detail of available resorts having different price ranges so that I could decide one of them with respect to my affordability and location. Please send me these details till June 1st.
I look forward to seeing your response as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 193, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n Singapore because it does not have as much places to visit as Maldives have had. ...
^^^^
Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as early as possible. Yours sincerely, John Paul.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65865384615 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53627528232 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.510175135 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156198553117 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535189653516 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430490108993 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790849085743 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612260948404 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.