You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night.
Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter:
Explain what will be happening
Offer your apologies in advance
Invite him to join the celebration
Dear David,
I am writing this letter to inform you about a small get together in our backyard this weekend.
As my nephew is graduating law school this this week we are throwing a party on his achivement with our close family and friends on saturday evening which might continue until midnight.
I would like to apologise in advance for the incovience we might cause to the neghiborhood. There are 4 families and 7 friends of my nephew who will be gracing the party with total guest list of 25. we would like to reserve street parking for extra cars I hope that will be not a problem.
We also extend our invitation for you to join the party it starts around 6pm with a small cake cutting followed by dinner and drinks.
Please let me know if you have any concerns regarding this arrangement, I would like to hear your suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Saketh Devineni.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear David, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
... As my nephew is graduating law school this this week we are throwing a party on his ach...
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Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... the party with total guest list of 25. we would like to reserve street parking fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70512820513 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52791775555 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3668642388 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190556257849 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770562171281 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369961339337 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944332782699 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228544291509 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.