You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
My name is Paul Smith, a graduate student studying in St. Peters College, Mumbai. I saw an advertisement in the local newspaper about a volunteer required to work as a part-time in the football club.
I am writing to seek an opportunity for the part-time job at the football club during evening hours. I was a part of the football team in my school at state level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years, representing my school in different tournaments. My special skill in football is defending and fitness training. As a result, I would like to train students in the club and also regulate myself into the game. Moreover, I will help students learn new techniques of the game to perform better.
If my application is considered and accepted, I would like to start working from 1st August, the same day of my vacation. I will be grateful if I get this opportunity.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the football club during evening hours. I was a part of the football team in my s...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years, repre...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86777002243 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6342470855 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246662039982 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889416706456 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808381414534 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118201445182 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688076975146 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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