You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports centre that you visit. Write a letter to the manager. - What the problem is - How you feel about the problem - What steps you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am a life member of your sports center. I am writing this letter to complain about the problems all members are encountering in the changing rooms.
The bolts on the doors and windows are all broken as a result of which anyone can budge into the room while we are changing. To add to it, the curtains are so dirty that they smell. The urinals attached to the changing rooms also stink. The dust bins are also filthy. On behalf of all the members, I request you to look into the matter urgently. We all feel immensely disgusted at the services we are receiving. We have all paid extremely heavy membership fees, and we feel that we deserve the best.
I would suggest you call in a plumber and a carpenter to rectify the sanitary and wooden fittings. The curtains need to be changed. Last but not the least, I would urge you to make regular inspections of the changing rooms consequently that the staff, in charge of the mopping and cleaning, do their work properly.
Hoping for prompt action from you regarding this matter!
Yours faithfully,
wisdom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... encountering in the changing rooms. The bolts on the doors and windows are a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, regarding, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62827225131 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45752269148 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6239721835 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196781790576 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593086864597 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538247474012 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118037843025 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269134167738 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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