You are ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks agobut you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service sayWhen and how you ordered the cheque bookAsk how long will have to waitAsk the manager what ac

Dear sir

I am writing this letter to express my annoyance with your irresponsible service. My name is urvashi and I am regular customer of your prominent bank ICICI for three days.

As I visited to your bank, two weeks ago and have been completed the procedure of issue new cheque book. I was assured to get my new cheque book in following week. Infact, I have been waiting for last ten days but I have not received any positive response yet.

I would like to know the time when you surround me with it. As next week I will have to submit some essential payments by cheque. Therefore, need of cheque book is desperately required. I would also want to know the real reason of delay.

You are requested to take some proactive steps and provide me cheque book as soon as possible. I strongly assert that this problem must be addressed at the earliest because dealing in this way is really disappointing.

I hope this letter will awaken you to serve the community in a better way.

Yours faithfully

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w cheque book in following week. Infact, I have been waiting for last ten days bu...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the time when you surround me with it. As next week I will have to submit some es...
^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essential payments by cheque. Therefore, need of cheque book is desperately requi...
^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty in a better way. Yours faithfully
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62430939227 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52181955809 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9061485241 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278964410833 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902949999821 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613775310336 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132453290473 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060889868247 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.