Most contries believes that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so? How do change their views?
Tourism plays a phenomenal role to uplift the standard of any nation. Presently, impact of tourism is thought to be perilous for enormous countries. Here, this essay will reveal various possible reasons as well as remedies for this phenomenon.
To begin with, tourists reveal their aristocratic life style. For instance, they reserve prominent hotels and spend astronomical outlay for basic needs such as clothes, meals and so on. Thus, presence of luxurious life allures young blood towards western culture. Consequently, tourism is considered as a menance for adults as the start migrating from native countries to affluent nations to fulfill their mighty aspirations.
Secondly, each country has their own culture and traditions. Therefore, they do not tolerate any disrespect for them. Tourists never pay attention towards rituals. To be specific, Indian always cover their head while entering any religious or spiritual place. Golden temple in Amritsar keeps a great respect not only in Indians heart but also in their soul. Tourists visit that place for amusement and capture photographs of prominent featutes. Eventually, this may offend the local people. Moreover, massive number of tourists is responsible for pollution of all sort like noise, air. Thus, it is the major cause of global warming.
Numerous steps are essential to solve this threat as tourism is the back bone to increase economy of any country. Initially, tourist companies take an oath to surround tourists with the importance of tradition of any nation before visit. Apart from it, encourage them for eco friendly environment.
To sum up, international tourism does have a downside. It is suggested to take some proactive steps and choose precisely to get best of it.
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as the start migrating
as they start migrating
each country has their own culture and traditions.
each country has its own culture and traditions.
massive number of tourists is responsible
massive number of tourists are responsible
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1427 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.17 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.641 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.823 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.245 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36594202899 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7351856995 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1060107302 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5238095238 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106170569011 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298957529353 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366268949302 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551633026731 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023215412749 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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