You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following:
when you want to arrive and leave
explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much they will cost
ask about activities
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with excitement and enthusiasm to visit your hotel. As we are a bunch of people in different age groups, we have certain requirements to be fulfilled. Hence, we would require your staff to make the arrangements prior to our arrival.
We will check-in to your hotel on 24th April at 12:00 PM and shall check out on 28th April before dawn. We require two exquisite presidential suites. Apart from this, we also require 3 standard rooms with king size beds, which have (You are referring to 3 rooms) river front views. We will appreciate it (As mentioned below, it might have been better to say – I will) if you could let us know an estimated cost for the overall requirements.
We are also keen to explore adventurous sports activities. Perhaps, not everyone in the group will have similar tastes. (Or – a similar taste) Hence, I am requesting you to kindly send me a list of activities with their cost on my email ID abc@gmail.com. Due to the short duration of our stay, i would request you to refer us to (we are usually referred – to – things) places for activities which are near to the hotel.
We will look forward to your kind response.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Nayak
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| 2018-06-13 | Jeshika Nayak | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oups, we have certain requirements to be fulfilled. Hence, we would require your ...
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...and shall check out on 28th April before dawn. We require two exquisite president...
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...rd rooms with king size beds, which have You are referring to 3 rooms river front...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ave similar tastes. Or – a similar taste Hence, I am requesting you to kindly sen...
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...on my email ID abc@gmail.com. Due to the short duration of our stay, i would requ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...Due to the short duration of our stay, i would request you to refer us to we are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64220183486 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67015034913 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9482969746 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8461538462 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20379199459 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072102174293 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602224024333 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126008811505 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379523465468 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.