You are planning a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should
- Tell her why you want to take a vacation.
- Describe your plan.
- Invite her to go with you.
Dear Sejal(Seju),
I am writing this letter to invite you to company me for my upcoming vacation in December 2020. I have been working at my current job for more than a year and I have not taken my vacation leave since I started working here. Because I am getting paid for the vacation, that why I am planning to visit The United States of America with you.
Let me explain my planning in detail here. I know we have been thinking to travel to a new country and we always had dreamed about the USA for the long period. I have planned everything such as our stay, places to visit, advance booking to museums, and out of your imagination, I reserved a visit to the Empire state building as well as The statue of liberty. I contacted hotels in advance about our food choices as we both are vegetarian. I have planned a surprise for you when we will meet.
Would you like to join me for the most amazing journey of my life. I know that you have 20 days of vacation in your school and want to spend some time away from books and study. So it would be a perfect time for both of us to travel the world together. I would certainly love to escape from my hectic life and spend precious time with you.
Please let me know.
Your friend,
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lding as well as The statue of liberty. I contacted hotels in advance about our f...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...food choices as we both are vegetarian. I have planned a surprise for you when we...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29831932773 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25710046451 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6050592432 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264563680726 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941762146527 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825538931355 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163532517994 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432122447108 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.