You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter - Tell them how long you are staying - Ask for some suggestions for what to do - Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to inform you about my short trip to Lahore city in January 2020.
I am a Karachi resident which is one of the largest cities of Pakistan; however, I have heard a lot about Lahore, so I decided to spend vacation out there. My plan is to stay at least a whole week in the city, so I would be able to explore the most places during my trip. As I never been to Lahore yet; therefore, I would need your suggestions to make my trip memorable. Would it be possible to suggest me if the city has ancient monuments and historical buildings to visit? How about the local transport facility like Metro, and feeder buses? Appreciate it if you could help me to shortlist prominent restaurants in the food street for dinner.
Could you please check it out if there are any cultural events are going to be organized in Lahore during my stay as I am found of Lahori's culture, and really would like to attend.
I look forward to hearing from you soon to book my flight.
Yours faithfully,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...re the most places during my trip. As I never been to Lahore yet; therefore, I would need ...
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Line 13, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lture, and really would like to attend. I look forward to hearing from you soon ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48947368421 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4342944509 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5187017676 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178588110229 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667973141807 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442669211023 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110131342516 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428116402213 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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