You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to
ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager about this.
Explain why you want to take time off work
Give details of the amount of time you need
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr.Jeames
I am writing with regard to a problem I have and I wish to ask your assistance in this matter. Actually my wife is having my next baby in upcoming month and because we don’t have any relatives in the city, I was looking forward to take some time off work. Considering the cares needed after the child is born, I think I am going to take at least two month off work. I totally understand that my absense would cause some problems for the company but I will try so hard to compensate my absense after my return. However, I was preparing for such situation from the moment I found out about my wife s pregnancy. So I talked to Mark and Robert to take care of some of my responsibilities at the time I am off work. Obviously I have talked them through the regulations they need to be aware of in order to take over my tasks.. I would greatly appreciate your assistance. I will be waiting for your decision.
Yours faithful,
Jack Watson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jeames
Dear Mr.Jeames I am writing with regard to a problem ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to taking'.
Suggestion: to taking
...ives in the city, I was looking forward to take some time off work. Considering the car...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...I think I am going to take at least two month off work. I totally understand that my ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 825, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... aware of in order to take over my tasks.. I would greatly appreciate your assista...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, so, at least, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35754189944 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63037738326 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0860766374 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204834521468 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083688914014 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473918161602 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199819311341 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.