You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter, you should say:
• Why you want to quit
• When you want to leave
• What you liked about the company.
Dear Manager,
As you know I’ve been working at AWB company for the past 7 years now where it was my first job. I grew up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, that it is time to move forward for a new career challenge, that’s why I need to quit this position.
I had the opportunity to work for another international company overseas. I’ve got a high position, with good offer conditions and benefits, that each one wishes to reach in his life.
I am willing to submit my resignation officially by today, hoping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize all my documents and the pay slips.
However, I am going to miss this company and the full support that I gained from the team, in order to be where I am right now. This company was and still is my second family where I collect multiple experience and good memories from here, that will assist me at my new workplace.
I would like to thank you for all these wonderful years, by standing next to me in all good and bad times.
Thank you,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, tha...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... why I need to quit this position. I had the opportunity to work for another...
^
Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send a...
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Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...ources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53301886792 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51580974694 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.2309208074 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17281763177 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823812095245 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973873019803 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761250326428 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702062653911 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.