You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter, you should say:•Why you want to quit•When you want to leave•What you liked about the company.

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You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager.

In your letter, you should say:

• Why you want to quit

• When you want to leave

• What you liked about the company.

Dear Manager,

As you know I’ve been working at AWB company for the last 7years, where I started my first work here, and grew up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, that it is time to move forward for a new career challenge, that’s why I need to quit from my position.

I had the opportunity to work for another international company overseas. I’ve got a high position, with good offer conditions and benefits, that each one wishes to reach in his life.

I am willing to submit my resignation officially by today, hoping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize all my documents and the pay slips.

However, I am going to miss this company and the full support that I gained from the team, in order to be where I am right now. This company was and still my second family and I am sure that the experience that I collected from here, will assist me at my new workplace.

I would like to thank you for all these wonderful years, by standing next to me in all good and bad times.

Thank you,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, tha...
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Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...ources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52830188679 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51744978099 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.063977249 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164217163448 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838198676387 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961506626894 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072667506485 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642789377306 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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