You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests. Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her
Dear Jenny,
My name is Linh, 24 years old, from Vietnam. I am writing this letter to tell you a little bit about me and wonder if we can be a friend.
Two years ago, I have graduated from University of Social Sciences and Humanities, specialized Journalism and Communication. Now I am a reporter of Vietnam Television which required me fluently work under time pressure. However, I still find it interesting due to I have a chance meet a great number of people from a different career which make me deeply understand about this life.
About my hobbies, in my leisure time, I usually read books and magazines which make me recharge the battery after a serious period time study. Besides that, I also adore watching videos on Youtube to keep me posted, subscribing some foreigner Youtubers is beneficial for me to enhance my listening and speaking skill in a very relaxing way. I have a plan come to your country – the United States in April to take part in a conference. So why don’t we arrange an appointment to know more about each other? It would be grateful if you led me to visit your city. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Linh Bui
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... I am writing this letter to tell you a little bit about me and wonder if we can be a frie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70442879746 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1720336054 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132850989051 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627301906014 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828428881111 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763343686209 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471169666005 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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