Essay topics:
You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
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Essays by user divyadr93
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- You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say- Apologize for damaging the product- How was it damaged?- What will you do about it? 67
- Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past What is the reason behind this Is this a positive or a negative development 56
- Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:• Say why you would like to go• Suggest what 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to you for not returning the dress that i took from you last month. What should I...
^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...from you last month. What should I say, Im ashamed for not returning it and the ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... say, Im ashamed for not returning it and the reason being it is not in the same ...
^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I accidentally damaged it and trust me Im not the one to be blamed. I wore the dr...
^^
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ess at my farewell party and after that i gave the dress for laundry. When it cam...
^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...laundry. When it came back from laundry i was ironing it so that i can return tha...
^
Line 9, column 286, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...k from laundry i was ironing it so that i can return that to you. Accidentally it...
^
Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...identally it got burned. I apologize for I know that dress is really close to you...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eart and you really love putting it on. I promise you to provide another one soon...
^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mise you to provide another one soon. I think we should catch up soon and I wou...
^
Line 15, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... of your choice to make it up for this. Im sure that you would definitely provide ...
^^
Line 15, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you would definitely provide me with an opportunity to make it up to you. Y...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Opportunity
... would definitely provide me with an opportunity to make it up to you. Your friend,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24731182796 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31648068935 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7046066427 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8333333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318656579555 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116714916266 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685531403906 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138266633403 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329459436715 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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