You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Hi Sam,
How’re you doing? How’s the weather? Did it start raining? i’m extremely sorry for not reaching out to you earlier. As you know, I was caught up with my dissertation works. Finally, I somehow managed to complete it on time.
I hope you remember that I had borrowed your old research notes last year. i’m apologising for not returning it back to you. Actually, last month during my project works, accidentally a cup of coffee spilled over cover page. Immediately, I had dried it using hair dryer. However, a few spots of coffee stains were present.
One of my colleague had suggested about a shop who specialises in removal of stain especially from old books and journals. Accordingly, I had given them the book and yesterday I had got it back in the same condition as I had borrowed from you.
i’m planning to make a visit to your town soon to enjoy my holidays with my grandparents. I‘ll bring along your notes then. Meanwhile, you may please do drop in an email with list items of you need from here.
Take care
Cheers,
Simi
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » w 78
- You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana 78
- You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.In your letter:-(1) write the details of incident(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to ai 87
- 11/10/2017You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say– Explain why you need a holiday.– Explain why you want your friend to come.– Where and when do you want to go? 73
- You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.1)thank you your friend for the holiday2)explain that you left your wallet in their house3)give them instruction of how to send back to yo 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Sam, How're you doing? How&apo...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...os;s the weather? Did it start raining? i'm extremely sorry for not reaching out ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ehow managed to complete it on time. I hope you remember that I had borrowed ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...owed your old research notes last year. i'm apologising for not returning it back...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e condition as I had borrowed from you. i'm planning to make a visit to yo...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...ition as I had borrowed from you. i'm planning to make a visit to your town...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with list items of you need from here. Take care Cheers, Simi
^^^^^
Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms of you need from here. Take care Cheers, Simi
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d from here. Take care Cheers, Simi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, finally, however, may, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8128342246 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72353733917 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5092872581 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.9411764706 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210823792967 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642644962765 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577629328126 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127081380131 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374102679706 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.43 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.