You have bought electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong. write a letter to shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem.

Submitted by chethana on Thu, 04/11/2019 - 03:17

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am very unhappy with the router that I have purchased five
days ago from your company. Unfortunately, the router has stopped working suddenly and I am unable
to connect to the internet and work from home. I hope you would do the needful at the earliest.

Let me explain the problem in detail, everything was fine for the first two days and the problem started
from 3 rd day onwards. While the internet connectivity is fine but there is a lot of fluctuations and
disconnections, hence router is unable to provide the uninterrupted connectivity. I did some basic
troubleshooting but with no luck. I could not figure out as to why the router is not working.

Most of the times in a week I do work from home, the stable internet connectivity is very important for
my work as it heavily depends on it. With this new device, it is getting extremely difficult to work
seamlessly; finish my current tasks and the deadlines that I have to meet. This is affecting my regular
work and most of my deliverables.

I have gone through the product documentation and warranty terms and conditions. I would suggest
that either you consider replacing the router or fix the problem within the next two days.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanking you,
Yours faithfully
Chethraj

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he problem within the next two days. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, while, as to, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78991596639 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87328607998 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575630252101 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3356618945 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4285714286 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180548480794 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586861336645 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570655269479 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561772100963 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520277858026 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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