You have a full time job ,also you are doing a part-time course in the evening , now you find out that you cannot continue in the course .
Write a letter to your course tutor . In your letter •describe the situation
•Explain that you cannot continue at this time
•Say what actions you would like to take
Dear Dr. Mohamed,
I am one of the evening course student which started one week ago. However , I won’t be able to continue the course , as I have been accepted in new full time job, and with the part time job I have already , it would be so hard for me to complete the course. I hope you allow me to postpone my course till next semester or take it online.
The course started on February 2nd, 2020 and the class is scheduled for three days from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm which is intended for employees like me. I joined the lectures for the first two weeks without any problem because I didn’t start at that time. However, my new job requires some new tasks in my office and I cannot leave my desk before 7:30 pm. Hence, I cannot continue this course as the timing contradicts my office hours.
As a solution and since I really want to complete this course, I would request you to let me continue it online. Otherwise, if I am not allowed, I would like to have it next semester.
Thanks in advance for your cooperation. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mona
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Dr. Mohamed, I am one of the evening course student w...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dent which started one week ago. However , I won’t be able to continue the course ...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., I won’t be able to continue the course , as I have been accepted in new full tim...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...course , as I have been accepted in new full time job, and with the part time job I have ...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...pted in new full time job, and with the part time job I have already , it would be so har...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd with the part time job I have already , it would be so hard for me to complete ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... till next semester or take it online. The course started on February 2nd, 2020...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mona
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38536585366 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33623672474 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9915887201 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309212426307 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103872188731 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716842015633 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170709235227 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640699560538 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.